a poem I wrote

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Wednesday, 20-Aug-2008 0:19:59

I just finished this. Enjoy.
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Your words make my mind work,
make my mind werl,
make words and images spring to mind,
like the grass from the earth.
They claw for the surface,
Claw for the sun,
Claw for the air,
For room to breathe.
For room to expand,
For room to blume and grow,
into lives of their own.
My mind is a garden,
My thoughts the flowers,
Or, at least,
something poetic and pretty like that.

Post 2 by Devious_Britches (smarty pants) on Wednesday, 20-Aug-2008 1:24:40

Oh how prettyful. I like it.

Post 3 by Wraith (Prince of Chaos) on Wednesday, 20-Aug-2008 13:41:37

Rofl Sharie. Must you wrap it up in such a Shariesque manner? It was a neat poem (despite my aversion to free verse), but.... "Or something like that?" *laugh*.
Kai

Post 4 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Wednesday, 20-Aug-2008 13:42:35

lol, well, Kai, I had to leave my mark, didn't I?